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It's another week; let's see how those goals are going.

1) Get halfway through the edits on WHITE SPIRIT.

Since adding those two scenes in, my plot moved a bit smoother. I don't know whether they gave my characters more of an emotional foundation or what. But chapter five is chugging right along. This is the chapter where I've killed off one of my MC's best friends. Now I need to pour the emotion into it. In the previous drafts, it was sparse and I can see why my betas told me to punch it up.

Also, I've set a deadline for these edits - August 17. Writing it down made it seem more real so I think I need to do more of that.

2) Work on it every day.

I missed last Wednesday and Friday, but I've worked on it all the other days. Gotta keep this up.

Now, if only they would fix the air conditioner here at work.

Great Job!

Date: 2013-07-16 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Great job on your goals. Emotional scenes can be hard.

Keep up the great work!

- Heather Jacobs

Date: 2013-07-16 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackanddarknight.wordpress.com
Good job! I'm working on re-writing the first couple chapters of my own novel, and am changing some scenes drastically. I think it will flow smoother once I get it done, but it's rough changing something that has been established in my mind for several months. Blah.

Date: 2013-07-21 05:04 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kthanna
You're really doing well hon <3 Keep it up and I'm sure you'll hit that August deadline <3


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